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Go ahead, leave me. by 8-Xenon-8 Go ahead, leave me. by 8-Xenon-8
I never liked you anyway.
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...:iconmotherofgodfaceplz: Now for critique... The vision for this is clear enough: Rainbow looking quite terrifying, using the scary demeanour instead of in your face horror. Originality is good, using your own style of colouring and design, with a large amount of the focus going into the single bloodshot eye. Technique is... Sketchy. The pick I have with this is that some of the colouring looks... Blotchy in places, mainly on the flank and fore hoof. That said, the way you have styled the mane and tail are good, and the ear is fluffy. I like the ear a lot :meow: Impact overall: Very original, using your own style to make a very simple yet effective horror piece. The colouring is a bit off in areas, and you may want to add more definition to the wing, it blends in with the coat slightly making it hard to see. That aside, I do like the detail you put into the eye, and the smaller details such as the ear, the tail and even the dark hoofs are well placed. Overall, great piece :iconrainbowdashlaplz:
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Critique by ajUlzzang Nov 23, 2012, 3:37:14 PM
yay! havent done one of these in a while... okay:

I gave the vision an all-star grade, it's plain to see what your'e aiming for: A grotesque-horrified Rainbow Dash. Her expression rather complements the quote you made for her.

"Go ahead, leave me... I never liked you anyway."

I think it terrifies her that someone would leave her, of all mares/colts. And with her personality and all.

We can notice all of the anatomy and whatnot, but one thing that butted me was her front legs; I think you should make the line between them more... solid? I thought you just made one really huge, weird-lookin' leg. I'm diggin' the glossiness you added to her coat and not that you overdid it with the fanciness.

My score for originality is just a four. Mainly because we've all seen grimdark pictures of all the characters (not all, but most) and it doesn't really bother most people like it should. The design is different, like all pieces, which I like that you do. You changed it up a bit. You put more of a terrified look on Rainbow's face rather than a terrifying glare. It inspires me to imagine what it couldve been, and the quote along with it.

Technique! Yes! I think it's absolutely perf, that you have mixed so many styles with your own. I like how you kept your anatomy all the same, but added different shading techniques onto it. Is that what it is? The red in her eyes makes them look bloodshot, but it seems as if she's crying. The unruly feathers give a disheveled look to her, making her look startled. You made all the little things match the quote and facial expression, which is pretty cool.

The impact, however, didn't impact me as much. It strikes me the same as what I said in the Originality paragraph. It's just that we've all seen at least five grimdark pics, and it doesnt surprise the normal Brony anymore. Overall, I'd give this a 4.5 in stars. Great job bruh, hope to do another Critique sometime!
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faster-by-choice Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey, you don't do all the details on pictures like these ones on one layer, do you? o3o
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This one was done on one layer xD
except the red BG... I think
but
that doesn't really count
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faster-by-choice Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Ah ok :3
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kvernikovskiy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think I prefer. To stay. Inside.
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RaenBoow Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's ok. I won't come back to haunt you when I've flown right into a cliff and died. Go ahead, abandon me like everypony else...
What are you waiting for? DIDN'T YOU HEAR ME!? I SAID GET THE BUCK AWAY FROM ME [link] !!
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PianoPonky Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVING this series. Very creepy and cool. The reflections of red (or pink, I guess) in her face and joints is harrowing for some reason. Great job with the sheen and eerie texturing.
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sebadg Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Wow i love the dissing in this one
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Heretic-Sage Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh that's not fair Dash, I don't even want to go to work, but I have to, or, you know, I'd be homeless. But I'll be back later... oh alright I'll bring cider too.
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Fallenpeach Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Woah.. this is epic, it really caught my eye O: I love the ears and mane the most!
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ;u;
People seem to like the mane.. but honestly I hate how it came out :XD:
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Fallenpeach Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ah, well it's because it's outlined in black and so shiny :] it looks awesome
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Sunnycat17 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So much realism... :iconpatrickplz:....swag.
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frong Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Eesh... the water tool effect is cool for feathers and fur, but the red shininess, bloodshot eyes, and visible spine... that's just forkin' creepy. I assume that's what you were going for, though, so you definitely succeeded.

We can has normal, not-creepy stuff nao? Plz? :|
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Normal? When have I ever been NORMAL?
Seriously, I love Creepy/Gory art, I don't wanna stop ;-;
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frong Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Your normal is normal for you... just not for everybody else. If it were the same as it is for everybody else, that would be boring. :B

Nuuuuuu... :tantrum: Creepypasta is, well... creepy. It's amusing on occasion, but I prefer cute/shiny/random/all of the above. Gory stuff is just gross. Ick.
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HalfMadCharacter Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
oooh shiny! I like it.
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RainGirlDev Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woww *_*
I like the beautiful shading on it : D
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Crafekster Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can definitely see your take on anatomy. :O Great work!
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mocha-creme Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<sub...butt

Very nice details syddiebutt <3 You should do more of these~
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha~ Thanks xb
I want to, I do :la:
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mocha-creme Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, want to continue our RP? It's Friday, soooo... :b
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would love to, but I'm so very busy right now D:
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mocha-creme Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ok, tell me when if you can today xD
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mocha-creme Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW
I'm failing subs a lot aren't I? :iconfacepalmplz:
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QuadICE Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She's so... glistery : )
Kinda reminds me of Slugbox
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh, Slugbox's stuff certainly is shiny xD
Though I never really liked how they made everything look that way, even feathers and such, but it's just not my thing I suppose. I have no right to tell the artist what to do uvu
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CuTTyCommando Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you okay, dash?
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Nutty-NekoSprite Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What art program do you use?
I use PSE, not that fun. :c
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Paint tool SAI c:
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Nutty-NekoSprite Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my shit, IM GETTING SAI
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha xD It's a really amazing program. Takes a little bit to get used to though :b
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Nutty-NekoSprite Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've used for 3 years, but at my cousin's house :iconlazyice:
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you have some experience with it, so it shouldn't be too hard xb
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HYperdudeman Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Black hooves are a thing now. Totally called it.
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love me some black hooves! xD
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Kioko-the-Pirate Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
No! Who ever said I was leaving you was a liar and a scoundrel!

I love the colors in this pic!
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frostedpuffs Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOOO DASH DASH I WOULD NEVER LEAVE YOU...... //SOBS ;W;
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AppleCider1412 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you streaming tomorrow or saturday? cuz i know you said you'll be streaming more often and still haven't gottten some of the stream images out ^^- oh happy thanksgiving
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Shattywack Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Gees, these are so disturbingly awesome.
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littlewip Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Keep making scary pictures like this and you will make my day.
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad some people can enjoy them, I really love drawing creepy stuff xD
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littlewip Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same here. Although my drawings arnt as creepy as yours are. :3c
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me-smith0211 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
No Rainbow Dash! Don't make me go, you're too cute to leave!
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ShadowFall1428 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
i sent an honest critique. sorry but i really don't like this comparatively to your others. sorry mate :(
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RookieOwl Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What is going on? :ohnoes:
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nothin', I was just angry at the time so I mad angsty art xD
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Peanut-ButterNJelly Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Xenon
Wat R U Doin
Xenon
STAPH!

(nah I like these :XD: Keep up tha good work :3)
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8-Xenon-8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NU AH REFUZ

:lmao: Thanks~
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Roazell Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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